Recently a friend asked me to take a look at a flyer ( which I attach here ) before it went to press. These observations agree with you ... and if maybe you wanted to make a donation, it's a matter of reciprocity!

Here are my considerations

Very nice, very well done!
- Take my picture group, which adds nothing and even confusing, while the beautiful pictures of Rachel. To hold. From the picture
group do not understand, who are sisters.
- Put pictures of the beneficiaries, impact, of the things actually done, and you are doing.
- Instead of the group picture a picture of prayer from behind, a photo of action from the back, six at the end of the wheel put your shoulders,
not make another opening, put something that close, and calls to action, a need, something that will suggest an action
to: "see how many people we help, help yourself", or see how many people are with us
- Close the flyer with the action, not with another opening
- A few more great photos and well understandable that many small photo booth
- I do not know how big the characters of the flyer in the real but know that older people have difficulty in reading less than 13-14pt Times New Roman, or whatever, they are most 'children do not read
- The photo of the girls laugh while they study it seems a good sign, I understand the joy .... but when you study you should see them in an attitude of study ...

The only thing missing is a signature of someone. The text has the tone of a letter (we are, we did, we do, ...) but questions without a signature. More 'staff is better